新东方押题课程，高一英语期末考试写作

2016-06-28 09:59

来源：太原新东方

作者：胡君芳

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观点对比类

【例题 1】

某英语报社开展就中学生可不可以带手机上学的话题讨论。假如你是李华，向该报社编辑写一封英文信，发表观点。

文章结构剖析

开头：写信目的/背景

正文： 观点 1 +支持句观点 2 +支持句

结尾：“我”的观点

范文精讲：

Dear Editor,

1.写信目的

I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.(从句)

2.观点 1 +原因

Opinions are divided on this issue. (过渡句——被动)The majority of the students argue that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone. And what's more, it's a fashion, which will be a plus for you.(内容拓展——非限定从)

3.观点 2 +原因

An army of teachers, however, hold the negative attitude(名词替换动词). They maintain that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phones. And it's easy to cause the students to view with each other. If necessary they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.

4. “我”的观点

Personally, I suggest students do not use phones in the classroom. Instead, we should devote ourselves to our studies. I hope you will find my opinions useful.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

词汇大拼盘

· argue 争论，认为

· What's more, 另外，

· an army of 一大群

· maintain (that)… 坚持认为…

· personally (speaking) 就个人来说，

· Instead, 相反，

· devote oneself to (sth.) 专心于…

加分模板句

· I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for (sb.) to (do sth.)

我写信来说说我们最近就(谁)是否有必要(做某事)的讨论。

· Opinions are divided on this issue.

在这个问题上，大家意见有分歧。

· A number of sb. argue that…

许多(人)认为…

· Others, however, hold the negative attitude. They maintain that…

其他(人)认为…持否定态度。他们认为…

· 非限定从(which指代整个主句)：(It's a fashion), which will be a plus for you.

这是一种时尚，能够给你加分。

预测2

建议信

【例题 2】

假如你是李华，你的美籍朋友Michael被北京一所重点高校录取。他给你写信希望你能提供一些关于学习和生活方面的建议，请你根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。

1. 合理安排时间;

2. 课前、课上和课后注意事项;

3. 注意劳逸结合。

文章结构剖析

开头： 写信原因+目的

正文： 具体建议①②③

结尾：表达愿望和祝愿

范文精讲

Dear Editor,

1.写信原因+写信目的

Hearing that you have been admitted to a key high school in Beijing, I'm writing to share with you my ideas on the preparations for your coming school life.(非谓)

2.具体建议(why+what+how)

A reasonable timetable should be scheduled first. (被动句)It will be of great importance for you in managing time and organizing activities. (it主语)Besides, to study efficiently, (非谓)you had better follow the basic rules of study, which include previewing lessons before classes, listening to your teachers during classes and reviewing notes after classes. (内容拓展——非限定从)Finally, keeping a proper balance between work and leisure is essential to keep you healthy. (非谓)You can make it a daily routine to take some exercise, such as playing basketball or swimming.(内容拓展——举例)

3.表达愿望和祝愿

I am confident that you will have a good time in China and obtain successful learning achievements.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

词汇大拼盘

· reasonable　合理的

· schedule　制定

· routine　例行公事

· obtain　得到

· be of great importance　非常重要

· efficiently　高效地

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